A bit weird I must say. I had absolutely no idea what was going on.
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the Syntax is so Astonishingly bad i'd be surprised to hear there actually a plot some where in this delusional mess.
even as a parody of "My Immortal" this fic is terrible because i can't tell what aspects are supposed to be parodied here. like i said in the last post reply, i guess the Author swapped Spelling with Syntax. but it doesn't help anything because its not funny. nor clever.
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Oh god, more horrible abominations of mankind.
homor
the last one was bad but...this one...
this just took a lot out of me.
what the fuck did proper Sentence Structure do to anyone? how can anyone butcher something so simple so easily?
i guess this is supposed to be Parody of My Immortal with Syntax instead of Spelling...but oh my how it falls flat on its ass.