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homor
Self-published independent author, writer and avid enjoyer of stupid, popcorn entertainment. Always happy to help!
"We all have a thousand bad drawings in us, the sooner you get them out the better." - Chuck Jones.

Age 30, Male

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The Shadow Realm

Joined on 11/11/05

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That was an interesting story.

I enjoyed it. XD

its not over yet.

Shut up whitey.

quite blackie.

I hope English isn't your first language.

Actually that shouldn't matter... it ain't mine but I still write in English and write pretty well I guess.

Anyways, not really original... hard to read with the lack of capitalization and such things...

Meh.

1- what do you mean "not really original"? like its too much like LOTR or something, if thats the case its because they're in the same genrem to be honest i've never even read LOTR, but i have played the warcraft games...so yeah.

2- i don't really ever use capitalization for the first letters of nouns, its just easier.

3- why does lack of capitalization make it harder to read?

i'm glad that you took the time to read it though. and despite my ranting, i'm very happy you've given me constructive criticism, this helps me shape my art and get better at writing, i am working on my spelling and i have started using caps.

again, despite my hostility, i am really glad you took the time to read what i wrote and were constructive.

criticism is like medicine, it isn't pleasant and its hard to sallow, but it it ultimately helps in the end.

also, on an unrelated note, if anyone spots any spelling or grammar errors please point them out, and what sentance they're in.

also, its not even finished yet.