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Self-published independent author, writer and avid enjoyer of stupid, popcorn entertainment. Always happy to help!
"We all have a thousand bad drawings in us, the sooner you get them out the better." - Chuck Jones.
Age 31, Gamer
Writer
The Shadow Realm
Joined on 11/11/05
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okay, i almost never do this for spaming, but that was lame.
banned.
EDIT: i'm sorry, i was just in a bad mood is all.
unbanned.
okay man, your an alright guy, i get where you were coming from.
okay indeed.
oh and by the way thats an alright story.
thank you.
Cyberdevil
Nice story! Lots of conversation though, and little descriptional diversions
homor
you liked what was written so far? you should check out the prolouge on page 203.